Okay, overall a lot of funny effects & jokes. I agree a fast and dynamic editing can make a video more interesting, but at some points I felt the cuts are quite aggressive. Watchers need a bit more time to absorb the the jokes, and it feels uneasy to adjust to the pace of the editing. Also, the effects at points seem a bit random and do not sustain the actual words being said. I don't mind swearing, but you overuse the f word :) A little variation in swearing would help. Some cheap lighting would also help. The video on my screen is a bit dark-ish.
Other than that, good editing skills and proper self-confidence there.