This is really weird in a really great way. The art style and animation is truly unique. If there's a way of preserving the uniqueness, but making it a tad more approachable, I could see it garnering a wider appeal. The long, almost unreadable text you had to pause to see, was a bit much for me at times. But, at least the text gave me a little context for the story structure, so it was helpful. I think if you kept the art style, humor and tone but applied a little bit more mainstream story-telling structure, this video would be a big win for me. Awesome work!