Hi. You need a better microphone. Those quick clips and message from the creator at the beginning of videos are filler, don't do them. I would recommend against having such a large window for your face-cam, and I would also suggest that the lighting be better when you use a face-cam. In the video, you seem to be acting scared at times when a normal person should not be scared. Faked reactions are very annoying and obvious. If your genuine reactions for a video are not sufficient, then you should not make a video about something. Chances are that if you're bored, your viewers would be bored as well. I am not using hyperbole when I say that I didn't laugh, giggle, or smile even a single time in the first six and a half minutes of the video, and even then, it was not because of your reactions. This video is very low-effort and barely edited.