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Average rating - 3.9166666666666665/5
Category - Gameplay
TheIyers 1 year, 1 month ago
Although it appeared funny at the beginning, later what we notice is that most people will not like when they hear "Do you want to lick blah blah". Instead you could have asked "Do you want to pet my dog"
2ndrategamingbros 1 year, 1 month ago
I'd have to say the vlog part of it was fairly well done, I went to check how many subs you had just because I felt like it would be higher. I don't know if you did it for the laugh or not but if you legit thought someone would "lick my puppy" instead of just saying something like "Give my puppy a kiss" or something else, that was all on you. lol
riseandyoga 1 year, 4 months ago
Haha I laughed a lot that such a sweet video and I enjoyed hearing about all the things that went wrong. Your puppy is gorgeous. I would definitely consider looking at your other videos and maybe subscribing. I would have really liked it more if you tried to do it again with the mistletoe and a better sign etc so you could have some successes in there as well, overall I really enjoyed it, very funny :)
historyofe 1 year, 5 months ago
Video started out strong. I liked the intro. It quickly gave me a sense of your sense of humor. You're comfortable on camera. The videos is a good length for the content. There's some production issues as I'm guessing you know. The desk is in focus, but you are not. I'd also separate yourself from the background with distance and lighting. And you realize the audio issue. But those are all easy fixes. When people did respond to "Lick My Dog", you didn't really have a follow up. The more you can get people to interact, the funnier it is. The woman who sang at the end actually had a good voice. And she was interacting. Instead of mimicking her in the background, how about being surprised how good she is? Then asking her questions afterwards. And then asking her if she wants to lick your dog. Just some thoughts. Great job!
PlushiesCommander 1 year, 6 months ago
I thought this video was very funny and would like to see more, plus your dog is so cute.................................... ...................................
DJOHNY 1 year, 8 months ago
1.initial thoughts are mostly positive , you have background music and good video and audio quality, the concept is quite interesting so ye... 2. i personally wouldn't subscribe because i don't watch this type of content, but i do see people who do like this kind of content subscribing 3. sure 4. there are a few chucklesome moments 5. favourite moment is probably the dude being defensive about his girlfriend licking your dog, idk what would be my least favourite 6. good job on actually doing this, as you already know social interactions are usually very awkward and cringy but you still went along with it, kudos to you for that
bergland 1 year, 10 months ago
I like the dynamism of the presentation. Good video cuts and sequencing of the action. Nice use of text items to support drama. Your presentation skills are good and the naturalness of your personality has the potential to offer interesting future directions.
sourfluffiness 1 year, 11 months ago
great quality video and nice unique idea. Im surprised people would reject such amazing offer! great video in general , but sad that so many people reject the offer. Keep up the great work on ur vids and cute puppy btw haha. oh I just got to the singing part and I really enjoyed it she's really great if you ever meet her again you gotta tell her how amazing she is!
naldos 2 years ago
Haha "rejected'. It is very entertaining to watch you tell the story about how it went rong. So i dit laugh and i think your video is well titled and stuf like that. Thanks for sharing this!
lowfatcupcake 2 years ago
Honestly, these kinds of videos are interesting because this shows the real side of those "viral" videos. Sometimes, people just straight up reject you but it's kinda funny. That overprotective guy was hilarious, it's just a dog bro haha. Keep it up! You've got a good vlog style.
harakiriprod 2 years, 1 month ago
This is forced content. There doesn’t seem to be any passion or soul in it. Make content that you want to make; although, this is what YouTubers do now a days so go for it.
TheSchaferShow to harakiriprod 2 years, 1 month ago
Not sure if you read the video bio or not but I worked with what I had. I thought I did better than you think, but we all have our own opinions. Thanks for watching and sorry you didn't like it.
oneshotryan 2 years, 1 month ago
My initial thoughts are that I think you have a really good camera presence when talking to the camera. The video definitely made me smile. It was funny watching you fail (in the nicest way) and seeing people's reactions
TheSchaferShow to oneshotryan 2 years, 1 month ago
I am glad watching me fail made you smile! (: haha thank you so much for watching!
Sancho 2 years, 1 month ago
Very good editing. Nice intro with grabbing attention and cuts to the dogs. Great job using sound effects. The only thing I would suggest getting a microphone for better audio when you are asking people questions. Good ending, would subscribe.
TheSchaferShow to Sancho 2 years, 1 month ago
I really did need a lav mic in this one. Thanks for watching and I definitely am going to buy one for upcoming videos Sancho!
JohnSpot 2 years, 1 month ago
Sorry about the failed attempt but you got that kind woman to sing for you at the end, dont get discouraged dude! it just didnt work out, so find some other way, audio is okay, its decent, i kinda like the approuch but dont come off as creepy or needy to people just for the sake of pulling it off, im glad you stayed cool after the rejections, it can be tough i know,anyways, glad to feel the holiday spirit from your vid, goodluck on 2018 bro :D
Swathihariharan 2 years, 1 month ago
overall I really the video, as this is funny video, I think you could have made it better by speaking a little faster and yes I would subscribe and share it. My favourite part is last part of the video when lady sings and the boys are funny.
TheSchaferShow to Swathihariharan 2 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for the review, I am glad you enjoyed it!
PseudoGrimm 2 years, 1 month ago
That was really good, you had an idea, that didn't work, and yet you still made an entertaining video out of it. Awkward circumstances can usually lead to satisfying video. I'm not sure if I have reviewed one of your videos before, you look familiar, but this is a very different type of video if so. The audio outside wasn't so bad, just picked up a lot of the background noise, not much of a problem, could still hear pretty much everything. The comedy was very good, could have more, but that's with everything, there was not too little. If that makes sense. I did laugh. I think my favorite part was the when you added the clip of Chris Tucker. Least favorite, just the guys reaction saying she didn't want to lick anything sir. Just towards wording lol, his problem, not yours. Sad no one had the guts to do something a little crazy and silly. Really liked the video, and yeah, I think I would subscribe. And share with a couple people, maybe even a shout on my channel, although our content is unrelated.
TheSchaferShow to PseudoGrimm 2 years, 1 month ago
Hope you mean "different type" of video in a good way (; I am also disappointed that no one decided to lick my doggo, but hey, sometimes the plan doesn't work out! Thanks for the lengthy review of my video, I really appreciate it. I am really happy that you seemed to like it so much! That is so surreal to hear that you think it is good enough that you would share it with others and even give me a shoutout. I would love one, actually! I am just trying to do what everyone else is doing and grow my channel. PS: The Rush Hour scene was my favorite too!
Visinga 2 years, 1 month ago
I like how its fast paced which makes it entertaining and I love the idea for a video. The audio was also really good. The best part is that you respected peoples privacy as well which made it not cringy to watch. Good job man keep it up I really enjoyed it :)
FilminWithOrion 2 years, 1 month ago
i think it was very unique and interesting, you should try to get a microphone for your camera so you can get their reactions and stuff like that other than that its a pretty good video!